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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jun 20, 2009 0:00:56 GMT -7
And I'll finish latererer.
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 9, 2009 17:34:58 GMT -7
So, ah, what are we doing with the plot? D:
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Post by Shard Prime on Jul 11, 2009 18:05:25 GMT -7
Ffff, Iunno! D:
Should I be working on a draft or something?
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 11, 2009 23:09:13 GMT -7
I need to know what plot we are using firssstttt. D:
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Post by Shard Prime on Jul 12, 2009 10:24:16 GMT -7
Ahh, uhmm, I guess the one that... Crap, I dunno! D:
The one in which Shard is called away and such?
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 13, 2009 1:29:21 GMT -7
I'm gonna try to sum the plot up, just so we can work out every last part quickly. This might be long, though, so be ready to read. (This is because if it's good I'm just gonna copy paste... xd) Also, do note that you will probably need to write something every few days, if not every day. This is your last chance, bub. xD Plot;; Deep in the forest of Mossflower lurks creatures of both good and evil. Although the most famous by far of all structures in the woods is Redwall Abbey, over the years other places have came to be. A fortress of old timber and wood has been maintained over time, and is one of the last pools of light in the darkening world. This fortress is the home of the Guardians of Mossflower, and is lovingly refered to by the elite force as 'The Fort.' Although attacked countless times and often in disrepair, a tiny spark of life and hope always walks the Fort's quiet halls, ready to fight for the protection of others. As of late, the Guardians have went through myriad leaders, known as War Commanders. Finally, two of them have managed to pull themselves out of the wreckage their home has become and stand on the fortress walls to look out over the lands they are now sworn to protect. These current two War Commanders have worked through the ranks of the establishment, and their honor and courage date back to it's first leadership. These two are Shard Prime, a young squirrel who was known for his prowess with a bow, and an also youthful but cynical and slightly crippled warrior vixen called Crystal Rosepaw, both of whom have earned their high rank from the blood they have shed to protect the weak. However, even those with the best intentions hold darker memories. Both of the leaders are from lands far off, and neither really enjoy speaking of their pasts, yet apparently not all skeletons want to stay in the confines of closets. From the far off city of Aerik, trouble brews, and there are some times that being a living legend is not helpful. Shard's king remembers that his kingdom was where Shard was raised, and sends messengers by ship to Mossflower from his island lands. In the typical Guardian style, the cold and hungry foreigners are let inside, but Crystal's cynical nature casts shadows of doubt, although she knows better than to be openly hostile. While the War Commanders listen in silence, the messengers weave their tale. A cult, more like an army, has come to Aerik, and the king pleads for Shard to bring the Guardians to do what his army has apparently failed at. Mixed emotions run through the fort almost instantly, but the verdict is up to the War Commanders. Shard feels a forgotten loyality to his birthplace, but his companion is silently seething that he would even conisder taking forces from the lands that they placed vows of protection on to go fight the battles of a king. As one of the three messengers is a sparrow, he leaves to tell the king that they are considering the request. However, his loose lips also plant the idea that one of the two War Commanders might be corrupted and murderous, and it's not Shard. The day the bird lands in the kingdom, Shard declares that he cannot send full troops there, but he will send the navy force to help them, with the king's acceptance. The messengers depart for the ship, eager to return home. Yet, they never make it back to Aerik. A month goes by after the message, and the ship returns without the other two messengers. Dark thoughts rush through the city, and they are coming form it's heart, the king. The sparrow is sent back, and has declared his kingdom will march to war against the Guardians. The ruler has decided that his two missing subjects were felled by Crystal, and that Shard has gone along with it and committed treason. Startled by this response, the two commanders plead for time with the king, each swearing on their honor that they had nothing to do with what appear to be deaths. The creatures living in the forest around the Guardians can smell panic, and the cries of the wounded in battle are surely close to follow. The Guardians in their current state are highly unable to wage a full war, and have a sinking feeling that if they would fall, soon would all the peaceful villages around them and maybe Mossflower Woods in all it's entirety. Guardian or outlaw, all efforts are going together on one thing: finding out what really happened to the king's subjects before time runs out and the ones standing against evil stand before the hangman's noose. --- Herher. That sounded dramatic at the end. That's what happens when I write stuff listening to screamo music. So yes... That work? :3 As soon as we get this done, I can do the last few things, and we can ad-spam.  |
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 13, 2009 1:39:17 GMT -7
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Post by Shard Prime on Jul 13, 2009 17:38:17 GMT -7
Groooovy. Sounds pretty good to me. Shard's gotta go over there at some point, right? And I like the smileys. They are awesomesauce. |
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 13, 2009 18:58:38 GMT -7
Yes, I suppose. xD Maybe he takes the Sojoner (sp?) over there to be all 'wtf, noes. D: We didn't kill 'em.'
They are awesomesauce, non? :3
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Post by Shard Prime on Jul 13, 2009 19:03:58 GMT -7
Lol, k! :U
Jaja! :3
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 14, 2009 3:38:18 GMT -7
Herher. A few last minute things, and to check again tonight when I'm... fully awake... And then I should be ready to SPAM AD.
Spam fairy ftw. :33
... And... To draw a good sig/avvie. xD And maybe come to terms with my tablet. Because it currently hates that I have twitchy fingers and shakey hands. D: I may be doomed to only chibis and color pencils, nooo. *slit wrist*
EDIT: I just have to sketch a few things, like badges and stuff. I'll try to do this before I pass out form lack of sleep, since it'll just be some easy shapes and stuff. I'll also try to get my tablet to work very, very much for this! Dammit, I will use the MOUSE if I have to once I get the lineart done.
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Jul 24, 2009 17:57:49 GMT -7
Uh, Shard, the site is ready to go up.
However, I need to know if you are absolutely positiveyou can be on daily.
If I don't get a reply in a few days, I'm afraid that I will have to change the plot and be the main War Commander or something. I just can't have leaders be inactive. I know you are a leader too and I don't have any power over you, but I just feel as if it would be better to have one active main leader than two and one be inactive. I check it every day and such, so...
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Post by Crystal M. V. Rosepaw on Aug 2, 2009 23:14:25 GMT -7
Hey Shard. Don't mentioned the board 'Guides and Such.' Nobody but us can see it. :3
It's currently being WORKED ON, AR.
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Post by Shard Prime on Aug 3, 2009 6:16:22 GMT -7
Groovy. No probs. :3
ARRR?
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Post by Shard Prime on Aug 3, 2009 6:17:47 GMT -7
(loldoublepost)
Ah, how can I edit the boxes on the left of the main page? I can't seem to figure out how. xP
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